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Eternity: Concorde

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:iconplzcomment1::iconplzcomment2::iconccwelcomedplz1::iconccwelcomedplz2: The drawing is kind of outdated; I'd rather have critique on Concorde as a character rather than the picture.

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Concorde is one of my Eternity characters; Eternity is an original series I write.
To learn more about Eternity, visit the offical website.

:bulletpurple: Concorde's character profile

I cannot get over how much better this re-inked version looks than the original.

Full reference sheet is in progress.

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Information for those drawing him PLEASE READ:
:bulletpink: His tufts and tail stripe should be tawny, not gold like the stripe on his hat (I made a mistake in the coloring here; I'll fix it at some point)
:bulletpink:His spats have three buttons on the tops.
:bulletpink:There should be a slight sleeve on his vest-about the length of a t-shirt sleeve.

Other pictures of him:
fav.me/d2a3m28
fav.me/d2rgqga
fav.me/d2kzg0j
fav.me/d2b0tc2
fav.me/d12jklc

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Drawn, inked and colored traditionally, then re-inked and recolored on Inkscape and PhotoImpression (on Concorde)/Paint (on the background)
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© 2008 - 2024 Magenta-Fantasies
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This will be my first critique on any drawing - so please don't kill me <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..." />

Keeping true to your style, absolutely adore the sonic style, this character sheet is well done in the areas of expression, posture and personality. All of these are used exceptionally well, telling his story without the need of text as art should do.

The color is simple an may seem repetitive at points but is contrasted by well placed contrasting or accent colors, like the gold and blue <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" title="=) (Smile)" /> I would like to see his wings stand out from the background.

Keep up the great work dudette <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww" />